Our Memories (about my sister.. again.. plz read)

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Poem By: crzyanglcassie14
Poetry

Tags: sad, sadness, loss, memories, sister, heaven, angel, smile, laugh, hospital, pain

I wrote this about my sister again. I don't know how good it is, but I hope you like it. Please comment and rate. That way I know if it is good or not! Thankyou!! View table of contents...

Submitted: Sep 12, 2008 Reads: 80 Comments: 4 Likes: 2

Those memories

Of you having fun

Of you laughing

Those memories

Of your smile

Of your playfulness

There are bad and good memories

But the ones I cherish

Are the ones with you

No matter if it was bad

As long as I was with you

It was good

But now I'm not with you

But those memories are still there

They play over and over in my mind

I see you in your room where you should be

But I don't want to see you with that pain

Maybe that's why your up in heaven

Maybe that's why you've left me to have my own memories

With other people

Are they all used up

Or are those memories fading

Your smile, Your laugh,

Our memories

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Comments:

ConcreteAngel

awww how sweet is this :) also very sad..i'm sorry you had to go through losing your little sis..i have a little sis and no matter how annoying she can get i still love her to death and i don't know what i would do without her! Great Job..

Posted: Sep 16, 2008

Author Comment:

Yeah thats how I felt.. Thankyou, I'm glad you liked it. Nobody wants to lose there younger sibling. And no one can think of life without them. Without seeing them when you come home from school or playing a small game with them. None of us wants to imagine it.. but I did. It's just the way life goes. I hope you keep that close bond with your sister forever.. you never know what can happen. Thankyou again for the comment!! I'll make sure to check out some of your writings!

Nonna2

Hello Cassie,

A very touching Poem. Your sister will never be gone as long as you remember her. Even when you get to my age she will still be there, at the age that you remember her as.

I once went to a Military Re-union with my mother and as I glanced around the Chapel I wondered what all these decrepit old men had to do with Daddy.

I suddenly realised that this was how he would have looked, however I had this beautiful memory of a fine young man to keep forever.

Kind regards,
Susan

Posted: Sep 24, 2008

Author Comment:

I know I shall never forget her. Because if I would I would have forgot her by now. As it would be the 2 yr. anniversary of her passing away on May 4th. And she is not an easy 10 yr. old girl to forget. thank you very much for commenting on my poem. It means a lot. And God bless your family.
Take Care,
~Love~
Cassie

Depressed101

It was very great! i liked it and it again, came from the hert. all of your poems come from the hert! ( i think, i havnt read all of them)
take care
.:jerr:.

Posted: Sep 29, 2008

Author Comment:

lol thankyou again! I sure hope they all come from my heart because the things I write about mean a lot to me. Thanks again for the great comment!! Take care!!
~Love~
Cassie

viper

They are never washed up.They will always be with you.Remember she won't let you forget them.She is always watching over you and always with you.You'll never forget the memories.

Posted: Oct 4, 2008

Author Comment:

yeah I know.... It's just the heat of the moment you know? Do you ever go into your brothers room, and just imagine him there... I know I do. I love the memories and I hate them at the same time. I know I will never forget her because it is impossible to forget her.. I loved her too much. Please take care!!
~Love~
Cassie