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The Walls Are Slowly Closing In!

Poetry By: crzyanglcassie14

I'm sure we have all felt this way. Another very deep poem. I would really appreciate thoughtful comments!! Have fun reading!! I'm looking forward to hearing your thoughts!!

Submitted:Feb 26, 2009    Reads: 130    Comments: 3    Likes: 3   

Your hands are reaching down

To pull me out of this deep hole

Why am I not taking them

Why won't I let you help me

It's my fault

I'm so naïve

Why won't I listen to the screams

Why don't I pay attention to the walls closing around me

I have to wake up

I have to start walking again

But there's no footholds

No where to go

Just a little spot

For me to curl up

And be silent

Not listening to what's around me

But dwelling

Stop dwelling you dumb girl

Stand up…

Grab my hand

I will help you

Just please stand up

We won't let you here…

It's going to be alright

All the pain will fade away

It takes time


Grab my hand

Don't leave

It will go away

I promise…

If only the promise

Could be kept…

I wish, I wish…


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