I guess the title kind of says it all. It's a heart felt poem. I really think you will like it! It is also dedicated to my sister. Please comment and rate! Thankyou for reading.
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Submitted: Sep 7, 2008
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Your smile
I remember that smile
That smile underneath the hat
That smile underneath the scars
That smile underneath the bed covers
That smile behind the curtain in the hospital
That smile kept me standing strong
That smile is staying with me
You would never not smile
Unless a doctor came in that you didn’t like
Or you were in pain
But you definitely made other people smile
And even though there are tears coming out of my eyes
Because I miss my little sister
I still smile thinking about you
Thinking about the memories
The memories that will always be with me
The memories I will never forget
Your smile
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leeann bachtell
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that was so asowme! u realy good! hey if u can, can u writte me a pome 4 thsi guy that wnt 2 mary me but im not ready 4 it, but i love him alot. it just i dont know how 2 explaine it 2 him with out braking up with him. i dont want 2 brake up with him im just not ready 4 marage.
Posted: Sep 9, 2008
This is a really heart felt and wonderfull poem......liked the expressions.....and a nice way to remember your sisier......Take care Juliet
Posted: Oct 3, 2008
I loved it.You will always remember it.I can still see my brothers and can still hear his laugh.I guess what hurts the worse is I always seen him smile and heard his laugh and then him commitiing suicide just shocked me.It still shocks me and find it hard to believe.I'm sorry I shouldn't have imposed.Great job.
Posted: Oct 4, 2008
Awwwwww!!!!! That's so sweet. You actually made me cry *teardrops*
KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!!! :)
Posted: Oct 25, 2008
