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Your Smile

Poem By: crzyanglcassie14
Poetry


I guess the title kind of says it all. It's a heart felt poem. I really think you will like it! It is also dedicated to my sister. Please comment and rate! Thankyou for reading. View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Sep 7, 2008    Reads: 214    Comments: 4    Likes: 2   


Your smile

I remember that smile

That smile underneath the hat

That smile underneath the scars

That smile underneath the bed covers

That smile behind the curtain in the hospital

That smile kept me standing strong

That smile is staying with me

You would never not smile

Unless a doctor came in that you didn’t like

Or you were in pain

But you definitely made other people smile

And even though there are tears coming out of my eyes

Because I miss my little sister

I still smile thinking about you

Thinking about the memories

The memories that will always be with me

The memories I will never forget

Your smile


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leeann bachtell
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that was so asowme! u realy good! hey if u can, can u writte me a pome 4 thsi guy that wnt 2 mary me but im not ready 4 it, but i love him alot. it just i dont know how 2 explaine it 2 him with out braking up with him. i dont want 2 brake up with him im just not ready 4 marage.

Posted: Sep 9, 2008

This is a really heart felt and wonderfull poem......liked the expressions.....and a nice way to remember your sisier......Take care Juliet

Posted: Oct 3, 2008

Author Comment:

Thankyou. I'm really glad you liked it! I'm glad you thought it was a nice way to remember her. She was an awesome little sister. Thankyou for the comment! It's awesome!! Take care!!
~Love~
Cassie

I loved it.You will always remember it.I can still see my brothers and can still hear his laugh.I guess what hurts the worse is I always seen him smile and heard his laugh and then him commitiing suicide just shocked me.It still shocks me and find it hard to believe.I'm sorry I shouldn't have imposed.Great job.

Posted: Oct 4, 2008

Author Comment:

You haven't imposed at all. This is a wonderful comment. I'm VERY VERY glad you loved it. I love it when someone connects, and I love to hear how they have connected to something that I have written. I am sorry for the loss of your brother. I hope you are dealing with it alright. I know everyone hates it when people say I'm sorry for you loss... I know I do. So I'm sorry for that. Thankyou for the comment! Take care!!
~Love~
Cassie

Awwwwww!!!!! That's so sweet. You actually made me cry *teardrops*
KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!!! :)

Posted: Oct 25, 2008

Author Comment:

Thankyou! I'm really glad you liked it! Sorry for making you cry! It is very sad though. So it kind of explains it. thankyou very much for the awesome comment!! Take care!!
~Love~
Cassie



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