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Splashing in the Rain

Poetry By: cupcakelover21
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I did this for a poetry contest for my school and I want to know all your opinions!! Please comment!
Thank you!
Cupcakelover21


Submitted:Apr 23, 2014    Reads: 6    Comments: 1    Likes: 0   


As I stare out the glass that separated the outside world from myself.
I could not hold in y emotions any longer.
I pressed my face to the glass as I felt the chill on my cold, soft cheeks.
While the wind howled through the trees and whispering their ever so silent secrets.
Water droplets start to fall from the sky and hit the Earth as the sky grew darker.
Putting my finger to the glass as I pretend to control a single water droplet as if in a race.
I look at my reflection in the cold, glassy force field and seen a smile spread across my face.
I run towards the outside world letting all my feelings escape from within my soul.
As each droplet of water hit my skin, I felt as if I could do anything.

By: Cupcakelover21 <3

I hope you all liked it and let me know what you all thought. I worked fairly hard on this and hope to get an answer back from the contest. :P
Thank you for reading,

Cupcakelover21 <3





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