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Poem By: Da Lee La
Poetry


Tags: mind, games

Playing at making you different..... my oh my da lee la!!!! View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Sep 5, 2008    Reads: 37    Comments: 3    Likes: 3   


Playing
 
My mind is capably rearranging
you.
I am playing at imagining,
that you are you;
the same, but somehow
different!
You should have been true,
but instead you are strange.
You are not
who you said you were.
And I am not in an
imaginary game.


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Smiley
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I totally get this poem.........

Posted: Sep 14, 2008

Author Comment:

HUH!!!

Da Lee La:

Most mysterious! Gave it an "I Like It" vote.

Happy trails,

Ed Bradley.

Posted: Sep 26, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks Ed

Gave it an I LIKE IT - It's a nice little gem of a poem. I like shorter poems

Posted: Sep 27, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks Marathongman - Woke up this morning (Sunday) and took my cup of tea over to my laptop to read emails and WOW it was like receiving a bunch of fresh spring flowers with all the comments you posted on my work. It is always so encouraging when someone leaves appreciative comments. Da Lee La



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