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This is about religious foolishness.
If you don't like your religion to be attacked,
you better not read this.
-It is the story of a whole town that commited suicide because they thought they were cursed.
-in the end, the only rational person that remained buried their leftovers
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Submitted: Aug 19, 2008 Reads: 176 Comments: 6 Likes: 0
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Posted: Aug 19, 2008
Really interesting. Nicely poured out. I was grown up as a christian now im a satanist, i really liked the ending where the last person had buried the lost and faithless ones. I dont really know what short of beliefs u got or anything but i got an impression that ur not a stupid person who believes in a ignorant God. I dont know what to say ...i really enjoyed it...im speechless .
Posted: Aug 19, 2008
:0 Dude, I totally love the music. haha. It was great! And your words were really amazing - although I was kind of confused. haha. :) Right on!
Posted: Aug 19, 2008
whouu... deep Ö
Posted: Aug 20, 2008
agreed! this was great, i love the message.
Posted: Sep 23, 2008
"Intelligence and god were absent"
This line says it all for me.
Great piece.
Posted: Oct 16, 2008
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