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Dark Thoughts
Poem By: DarkFairy8907
Poetry
Don't know really how to tell you about this one. It scares me to read this poem. I was in a depressed mood and a friend said I should post this. Showing my friends and fans a darker side to me. View table of contents...
Submitted: Mar 4, 2008 Reads: 110 Comments: 23 Likes: 5
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wow, that is a darker side of you, i hope you don't walk that often.When a poem is set out this way you read it differently, i think this way suites it better.
Posted: Mar 5, 2008
Powerful, even in your darkest hours you seem to have a strength ~hugs~ I too hope you don't walk that line too often, it would be a shame for someone with a light as yours. Keep safe Dark
Hawk ^_^
Posted: Mar 5, 2008
There has to be light to have darkness
Posted: Mar 5, 2008
Something bad must have happened...
Posted: Mar 5, 2008
Very powerfull thoughts....hope your feeling better.....Juliet
Posted: Mar 6, 2008
How can we know true darkness? Unless we can find absolute darkness, the worst you can get,then it is nothing but a measure of the absense of light.
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... I don't know how that really relates. But this and your summary of it reminded me of it.
Always remember that no matter how dark or bad your writing may seem, you shouldn't be afraid of what it is. I know how you feel, for a lot of the stuff I've written in the past scares me because of its morbidity.
---BACK TO THE COMMENT! ^_^ I like this because it's sincere.
*~*AsNightFalls*
Posted: Mar 6, 2008
Lionheart
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Hmm, sounds like something i would write in a bad mood...
It was dark and sad but everyone has a darker side and we are not perfect people so we have insecurities. Its good to know this was written a long time ago. Its comforting to know you dont write like this anymore.
I like that idea of searching for a light... but i dont need to remind you of that, you already know. This was a piece to link us all in the constant battle we face, not against an enemy, but ourselves. It was well done.
Posted: Mar 8, 2008
I'm inspried, a great read DarkFairy! ~ Nixie
Posted: Mar 11, 2008
So many things - the feeling of lose, being trapped, darkness... I have an idea for a short story! hah! :)
Posted: Mar 11, 2008
I know this feeling.
You escaped this feeling???
how???
I feel so little tied up by millions of chains that are choking me.
I just dont know what to do.
I'm scared DarkFairy.
I'm terrified.
But this poem is so amazing. I'm enchanted by your words.
Ive printed this out(out I hope you dont mind) and posted it to my locker. It inspires me. Good work
Posted: Mar 19, 2008
wow, this is really good, really powerful! and i understand the feeling. Great work!
Posted: Mar 21, 2008
Theartnet
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Interesting...
What brought this one on?
What was the insperation for this one?
Its good reminds me of the Demon within my mind.
Posted: Apr 5, 2008
this poem reminds me of drowning (not that i've ever drowned, unless i'm a ghost) well..i mean drowning can take different forms..water..fear..sadness..sorry
great little poem if u get my meaning?
Posted: Apr 7, 2008
Yes, U r right....GOD will help us get out of that feeling of being choked by darkness.
It's such a different lay out.
Gr8 read
Posted: Apr 10, 2008
Awesome, I know all about that line. I love this poem, I love seeing that you can do dark poems as much as fantasty novels, its all so perfect. It doesn't matter if its short, I never heard anyone say quantity over quality, if I had I probably would have killed them,lol. I know I can say I am your biggest fan but so will many others so I will settle with I admire every word and story and poems that come from you, your were born for this, I hope you never stop writting. Do you think you could help me with something in my novel, should I add order to the world if chaos I've created?
Posted: Apr 17, 2008
So many comments... what can I say that has not already been said? Though if you think about anything you say has already been said a million times before. The only thing that sets you apart is the simple fact that it is you saying it, and if not for that, I am sure we would all go insane. Or, in our case perhaps, suffer a far more terrifying fate; we would conform... Makes me sick just thinking about it.
Oh, and I love this piece. Not your best, but better than most. I loved it.
Posted: Apr 30, 2008
It was dark..And short..To the point i would say..I can say dat writing dis down was a good way to express your feelings. Instead of doing something crazy about it.
Posted: May 7, 2008
What is darkness anyway?
Should we all be afraid of it?
I believe that darkness is a friend. A powerful factor of true self-understanding. Afterall, God created day along with night.
Darkness only consumes our heart if we let it. But it has no intentions of doing so. What we think is what will be.
This is a great poem darkfairy.^^
Hoping so much you won't let it consume you.^^
Posted: May 12, 2008
*Scared 4 a second*
Dats really good dat u expressed ur feelings dis way then...
Posted: May 13, 2008
hi! df. is it an allusion to an approaching death. sounds scary. ;-)
Posted: May 14, 2008
well that was a dark poem
but i liked it, its the kind of poem that makes you think, you know?, like it even makes the reader reflect on his own life to see where his hope, his light has gone.
great job =]
Posted: Jun 2, 2008
i love this because this is the real you. im sure that you are full of light and joy, but emotions like feeling alone and in the dark is completely natural. its oka to be angry and its oka to be sad, you shouldnt have to censor your honest feelings in order to make the day easier for other people. you have to accept the "darkness" but you cant let it rule you. its not something you should be afraid of by any means, it is there to make you stronger and to make you realize that whatever happened (whether inside or outside) is how it has to be. please remember tho that there is ALWAYS a way out, it just takes some people a bit longer to find the exit.
Posted: Aug 22, 2008
i understand, i really do. but if you look at what you gained from the darkness instead of what you lost, you see that it only made you stronger. that shadow made you see a side of yourself that in turn created your strong spirit. you know that for even in that complete darkness, no matter how long it took, you knew deep down that there was a light. bad things happen and spirits become broken, but its the fight to see the better is what brings you to bliss. its just like a ying-yang. you need both to live and both to completely understand.
Posted: Aug 24, 2008
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