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Submitted: Mar 25, 2007 Reads: 106 Comments: 12 Likes: 3
His Eyes
His eyes watch over me from every place.
They are firm, just, and gentle, but
Never to be seen.
His eyes judge all who defy him.
They are in the ocean and air.
Those eyes lead me to the truth
And away from lies.
Those eyes are my Father's.
God's eyes.
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cute! i like it!
Posted: Mar 25, 2007
this one is the best of all your poems...though you left out the 'h' in Father's...you should keep up with writing poems...
Posted: May 14, 2007
I think its awesome, defines god as perfectly as us mere mortals can describe him.
Posted: Oct 1, 2007
Qcontinu is right, it defines god very well
Posted: Nov 28, 2007
woah,
that seriously just blew me away.
i totally love it :]
Posted: Jan 13, 2008
=D I loved it!!
**mandy[massacre]**
Posted: Jan 16, 2008
I loved it buddy and It reminded me of all the sacrifices my papa made for me .....thanks Dark fairy...
Posted: Apr 16, 2008
u know why I said it reminds me of Papa because PARENTS r incarnations of GOD and each child has 2 of them with him/her- Papa and Mom
Posted: Apr 16, 2008
Again..Short and to the point..Oh im not being mean, im saying dat i like poems dats short and to the point cause it makes no scence to write alot and it means nothing,until you get to the point of the poem. I like how you say dat god is watching us where ever we go. Its kindof rare to read a poem like dat on people on booksie.
Posted: May 7, 2008
knowing God is watching over us all the time is really a comfort. I like it.
Posted: May 18, 2008
LOVE IT
B-U-T-FUL
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Posted: Jun 20, 2008
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