Open Doors

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Poem By: DarkFairy8907
Poetry

Tags: religious, god

Personal struggle for understanding, rejection and confusion. View table of contents...

Submitted: Mar 30, 2007 Reads: 89 Comments: 5 Likes: 0

Open Doors

You open the doors

to our chosen path abroad.

This is the right choice.

How you betray me

the door closed in front of me.

My hopes are shattered.

You open the doors

for others and shut me out.

Unrighteous you are.

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Comments:

Liathano

i like this one...but is it from God's point of view...i only ask cause it got a little confusing from the first set to the next...

Posted: May 14, 2007

Author Comment:

No it's from mine. I was struggle with my relationship with God and this is how I felt at the time.

gothiktinkerbella

=D I liked it. lol what have I not liked out of all your stuff that ive read so far. I know i will never not like something by you =D
keep up the amazing work

**mandy[massacre]**

Posted: Jan 16, 2008

Author Comment:

Lol, there's one poem I haven't put up yet, so I don't know. The poem kinda scares me when I read it, knowing that I wrote it.

I'm glad you liked it though.

~DarkFairy~

saratopia

:) this is a good poem, i really liked it. It makes a statement.
:)

Posted: Feb 3, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks I'm glad you liked it. It was kind of a personal struggle poem that just randomly came out. It scares me at times when I read it. But thanks again.

~DarkFairy~

Prizemoney0135

R u mad or something? Tell the truth {TTT} I really don't understand the poem. {Ask around my freinds, im easily confused.}

Posted: May 12, 2008

Author Comment:

With this poem I was yes. It's all kinda personal, I was having conflicts with my beliefs, feeling like I put so much effort into doing all I was suppose to do, but being rejected and having unaswered prayers, stuff like that. Hope I explained it enough?

~DarkFairy~