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Breeze love

Poetry By: darkism
Poetry



This is poem,in which is for the pic. challange that Zaphera
organised.


Wish me luck xD


Submitted:Nov 2, 2010    Reads: 60    Comments: 7    Likes: 4   


Everybody is smart from the certain point,but when you open your mouth

you reallize,that you are traped in your own decoy, you want to be honest,

but there is just something that is pushing you away from this.

Actions preveale actions i guess, and in some point you ask yourself,

why am i doing this? , is mybe the untrust that weve tryed to put on

ourselfs , or no love in this lost freindship, whos swimming in the sea

with no breeze throught the air arround me, my thoughts are like vacum,

need the air to servive, need your thoughts of your mind or just reallization

of our freindship.

Your silent voice and your actions teel me that you dont want to see me anymore,

but i will ask you one more time, just to be certan.

Can we countinue to be freinds? . Or you want to quit all,that we had.

Just a simple qestion from the boy who seemd confuised of your silence,but mainly

confuised.





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