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the cat's ways

Poem By: Darknessinside
Poetry


Tags: cat, poetry, fear

A black cat in the nite View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Jul 5, 2008    Reads: 38    Comments: 6    Likes: 1   


A black cat prowls along in the nite

It crossess paths with a young man

Imediatley, the cats claws come out as it hissess wildly at the man

The man tried to run

This angers the cat

The cat pounces on the man

The man screams inot the nite

But no one hears his scream

The cat bites and claws

As the man tries to escape the cats jaws

The cat slowly begins to grow

It turns into a black jaguar

The cats paw

on the man's chest

The cat begins to slowly clamp its jaws

The man lets out one last fatal scream

Something u could never dream

It strikes fear into your heart

And then the cat clamps its massive jaws


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Comments:

wow. great rythm!

Posted: Jul 5, 2008

Author Comment:

thx read darkness inside too i like thta poem better also check out pain of the black rose by black rose

That sucks to get killed by a cat =P

Posted: Jul 5, 2008

Author Comment:

lol yea it does

Wow, that was very dark, and very interesting, too. I love cats, and I thought this was a very cool poem. ^^

Posted: Jul 5, 2008

Author Comment:

thx read my others too they also dark

You Goth

Posted: Jul 6, 2008

Author Comment:

lol i know

wow...That was dark and interesting. I would work on the way you present ideas and the vocabulary. You have a great vision and a great potential!

Posted: Jul 6, 2008

Author Comment:

thx a lot i rly appreciate positive remmarks

This is really great!!! :)

Posted: Jul 12, 2008

Author Comment:

thx



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