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unheard scream

Poem By: Darknessinside
Poetry


a poem about a scream f pai nand misery that goes unheard View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Jul 8, 2008    Reads: 64    Comments: 7    Likes: 4   


A shot rang out in the dark

Followed by a scream of pain and terror

They both go unheard

They both go unheard

The agnoy continues

As the scream echoes hrough the nite

Darkness aorund no one else in site

As his agnoy tortures his soul

No one comes to help him

He screams again into the nite

It goes unheard

It goes unheard

He is as good as dead now

He there is blood all around

As it contines flow form him onto the gorund

His eyes roll back

He lest out one more scream

It goes unheard

It goes unheard


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Comments:

It's a good poem. I'm going to keep annoying you about spelling and English though! Fabulous work, for the most part!

Posted: Jul 8, 2008

Author Comment:

thx chris and idc if i spell and cappalize
u still get the idea so suck it

Lol, nice, heart warming poem. Agreeing with Fonzie, proofreading wouldn't hurt. Great job

Posted: Jul 8, 2008

Author Comment:

lol what else is ne wim too lazy to proffread

hi! mario. oh! god. this seems like a scene of gang war on streets. and the wounded's screma'll go unheard as no one'll come forward to help him out. u give a very bloody description of the gore and death. thoughtful. lol. ;-)

Posted: Jul 9, 2008

Author Comment:

lol thx im always rlly descriptive in death scenes

god. I'm having very horrible pictures. But very good.

Posted: Jul 11, 2008

Author Comment:

lol good thats the point

Wooow!!This is sooo great!I love it,like all of your other poems,and that book especially.
You really write great!
:)

Posted: Jul 12, 2008

Author Comment:

thx ill check out some of your work osmetime sry ii haven't been on in awhile

that was awesome.... tell dave to stick that in his juice box and suck it! :P lol!

Lydia♥

Posted: Jul 24, 2008

Author Comment:

lol

Awesome..I like it!!

Posted: Aug 13, 2008

Author Comment:

thx again lol



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