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Submitted: Oct 30, 2007    Reads: 114    Comments: 3    Likes: 3   


 

Exasperated melodramatics
Hungarian tunes
Whistled non threateningly
Dramatized spacesuits
In the midst of cautious
Overtones and undertones
Outside the lines;
Trivial beliefs -
Overprotective power
Yet the oxygen
Is mine.


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Comments:

Interesting.
I sense the frustration..

Posted: Oct 30, 2007

Author Comment:

It's funny; no one understands what it's supposed to mean. I guess my brain really is alien to everyone's thoughts.
Thanks for the comment though.

INTENSE...yes the OXYGEN is MINE....WONDERFUL READ

Posted: Jun 7, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks. You can take my freedom but you can't take my oxygen.

PoetryDecoder
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Is this poem about religion?

It's very interesting and metaphoical! :D

Posted: Jul 21, 2008

Author Comment:

In a way, it is. And in another entirely different way, it isn't.



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