whisperings
night time
my love
my enduring...hope
my promise
my beautiful
a dream
shattered beneath
the whispers
of his name.

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Submitted: Jan 3, 2009 Reads: 67 Comments: 2 Likes: 3
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A perfect poem, in my opinion. Awesome DoS......
Posted: Jan 3, 2009
You've condensed your thoughts, giving them over to a beautiful form. That's the poems that I like. The simplicity of a haiku, but you've added enough of your persona to make it beautiful. Just wanted to explain why I think it's perfect. luvluvluv
Posted: Jan 4, 2009
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