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cold pillows

Poem By: DefinitionOfSoul
Poetry


I broke through the barrier of being wordless. Enjoy. View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Jan 3, 2009    Reads: 67    Comments: 2    Likes: 3   


dripping tulips
whisperings
night time
my love
my enduring...hope
my promise
my beautiful
a dream
shattered beneath
the whispers
of his name.


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Comments:

A perfect poem, in my opinion. Awesome DoS......

Posted: Jan 3, 2009

Author Comment:

I'm glad you liked it. Although perfect may be a bit too generous, thank you all the same.

You've condensed your thoughts, giving them over to a beautiful form. That's the poems that I like. The simplicity of a haiku, but you've added enough of your persona to make it beautiful. Just wanted to explain why I think it's perfect. luvluvluv

Posted: Jan 4, 2009

Author Comment:

Oh, ok. Funny you should say that... as it always seems as if my thoughts are floating in multiple directions, and I must catch them where they land. Meaning, they feel far from being condensed.
Thank you; again.



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