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Unquenchable

Poem By: DefinitionOfSoul
Poetry


A poem inspired by Jack Kerouac. Enjoy. View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Apr 16, 2007    Reads: 72    Comments: 3    Likes: 0   



Swiftly moving - shaking uncontrollably - deliberately.
Mindless indulgence. Peaceful sleep.
Rude awakenings. Beautiful misconceptions.
Underminable love. Shaky foundation. Out of control.
Mindlessness. Turning inside.
Twisting - painful, deliberate. Uncontrollable.
Writhing. Shaky hands. Tilted eyes.
Wondrous sounds. Putrid smells.
Systematical emotion. Wordless.
Spotless. Mindless.
Uninteligable self indulgence.
Raped by lies.
Sweet defeat. Belief in nothing.
Love and strings.
Befriended alone.
Understanding wind.
Walking the sea.
Jittery teeth. Aggravated soul.
God above.
I below.


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Comments:

Great use of words. Very different and unique. Enjoyed it. SN

Posted: May 6, 2007

Author Comment:

Thank you. I tried to use as many different words as possible, without thinking too much. =]

wow, impressive.

Posted: Jun 17, 2007

Author Comment:

Thanks. I appreciate the comment. :)

Very good.
I love Kerouac.
I'm currentky reading a bio on him by Tom Clark, very fascinating.
Not that you wouldn't know all you need from reading his stuff, but anyway.
Like your work alot, keep it up.

Posted: Jul 15, 2007

Author Comment:

Yeah, Kerouac is very fascinating. : ) I'm glad you liked it.



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