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Temptation: Sweet Love

Poetry By: dlaura69

Little One's point of view, sort of a response to Sweet Love

Submitted:Jan 27, 2013    Reads: 188    Comments: 3    Likes: 4   

Run Run Run Little One

I heard you scream to me

And I ran my Sweet Love

But I could not help myself

I felt her touch

So sweet

So soft

So full of love

I could not help myself

I went to her

Even as I heard you scream

I went to her

I heard you scream to me my Sweet Love

But I could not stop myself

You begged me to see

And I did

I saw a lost soul

One who needed saving,

One who needed love,

One who needed me,

So I stayed behind

Even as I saw your pain

I stayed behind

But now I see the truth

I see the evil in her soul

I see her true intentions

I know she wants to do me harm

Please my Sweet Love

Save me from her wickedness

Save me from the pain

Save me my Sweet Love


Why aren't you moving?

Why do just stand there?!

My Sweet Love

Do you not hear me scream?

Do you not see the terror in my eyes?

I admit my Sweet Love

I was wrong

Run Run Run

I hear your words

Echoing in my head


Can you not see?

Save me!

Oh why did I choose this path?

Why did I leave your side?

Why, tell me why my Sweet Love

Why must you let her take me?

Hear my screams

Have you no shame!

Just standing there,

Doing nothing to help me,

Watching me being dragged away.

I need you now!

Save me from this evil

Save me!

My Sweet Love

There's nothing else in my mind

But the words you repeatedly screamed to me

The words that could have saved me

The words that ended me

Run Run Run Little One

I heard you scream to me...


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