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How Do I Survive...

Poem By: Dmonik
Poetry


How do we survive tragedy, when the tragedy is ourselves? View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Apr 30, 2008    Reads: 21    Comments: 2    Likes: 1   


How can I survive tragedy
When the bodies lay around
The echoing calls of Deaths whisper
Carried on the breeze of Everafter....

The sky of Raven, blackened, angry
Screaming in rage
Like a wounded animal seeking revenge
Against torment, against me

How can I be saved from what I am
A raging inferno of anger, pain and misery
Calamitous to the touch
The calloused body of nonexistence

How can I survive tragedy
When the the tragedy is I.......


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Comments:

Great write Dmonik :-D
yes, how can we survive when we are enemy of our own selves?
I like this line:
"Echoing calls of deaths whisper being carried on the breeze of everafter"
actally the whole thing is wonderfully discriptive.
take care, ~katie

Posted: Apr 30, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks very much for taking the time to read and comment on this piece. It is my belief, that mankind is the instrument of his own eventual demise. We are a true self destructive species that's seems to take pleasure in the death of our own kind...
Once again, Thank You.

'D'

Great piece Dmonik!

Posted: May 1, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks Brian :)



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