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Upon The Velvet Skyline

Poem By: Dmonik
Poetry


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Submitted: Jun 25, 2008    Reads: 12    Comments: 2    Likes: 0   


Upon the velvet skyline
The lightning flashed in rage
The thunder rumbled, deep and low
Like a beast caught in a cage

The raindrops fell like tears
Weeping heavens, open'd
The howling wind tore at my skin
As I walked alone

Tormented by the whispers
The leaves in the tree's, they laughed
Raindrops mixed with salty tears
If they only knew my past

To my knees I fell
To the Heavens, I raised my arms
I screamed to a deity that didn't care
And he struck me down

As I lay weak and broken
In a pool of tears and lies
I contemplated my path of life
And all I'll leave behind

Upon the velvet skyline
A silhouette is etched
I took the blows, with marks to show
But still I'm standing proud


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Comments:

good stuff man! This can apply to many situations in life...like one I have been going through lately. And my attitude matches it precisely. Keep the old chin up!

Posted: Jun 26, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you very much Robert :)
Your comment is kindly appreciated.
That which doesn't kill us, makes us stronger :)

Another good piece of work Dmonik

Posted: Jun 28, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks again Brian :)
Your comments are most welcome.

'D'



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