Drowning in your sorrows

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Poem By: dom22
Poetry

Tags: addiction

This is a very personal poem. the poem says it all..... View table of contents...

Submitted: Jun 7, 2008 Reads: 71 Comments: 8 Likes: 2

Drowning all your sorrows

Forget about your pain

Live in a world of make believe

What do you wish to gain?

Drowning all your sorrows

Forget about your fears

Live in a world of dreams come true

Wipe away your tears

Drowning all your sorrows

Forget about everyone

Live in a world that makes no sense

Reach out to anyone

Drowning all your sorrows

Start facing your fears

Live in a world where dreams come true

I’ll wipe away your tears

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Comments:

Very beautifully written. I like it. Hope your feeling okay though. I thought of myself on the first couple of lines. We live in a world where dreams supposedly come true but I don't see mines going that far.

Posted: Jun 7, 2008

Author Comment:

hi there.. Thanks for your comment. Never stop believing in yourself or in your dreams.... You know a person with nothing but his dreams could well be one the wealthiest peple on earth.... Your dreams are the only thing that NO ONE Can ever ever take away from you.... It's up to everyone to make them come true for themselfs. Good luck

LeAnne

i always wished i live in an adventure and fanrasy and all that.
i still do!
Nice poem! relates a lot to everything!

Posted: Jun 7, 2008

Author Comment:

Yeah it does... That's the power of poetry ( well my opinion ) everybody can attached their own meanings to it... you can make it work for you regardless of who you are or what your situation might be.... thanks for the comment.

Pratibha

I absolutely ADORED THE LINE -

Live in a world where dreams come true

Lovely read....do keep me informed for next posts too....

Posted: Jun 7, 2008

Author Comment:

hi prathibha, as always wonderfull to hear from you.... thanks glad you liked it.... yeah people that are addicted to some or the other substance usualy live in fantasy world. They get out of touch with reality. Like I said this is a very personal poem about a very special person in my life. I just wish he could take my hand when he needs it and when i hold it out to him.....

dom22

thanks to everyone that commented on my poem. I'm having a bit of trouble logging into my comments so as soon as this is fixed I will say thanks personally ..... take care......

Posted: Jun 9, 2008

Azmat Shah

Hello,
I liked this poem alot. It was simple yet eloquent and the pace was just perfect. It was a very fluent read and enjoyable at the same time. Gr8 going.

Posted: Jun 10, 2008