That's it folks ; My most testing piece. But then I decided to save you all thetrouble of appending commentaries so I just added my own.
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Sara's message to a loser.
She does this in a Robert de Niro voice in front of a mirror like in Taxi Driver , or alternatively she could be doing a pole dance with a rifle over her shoulder.
I honestly don't mind at all how you see her ; as long as you see that she's got the guy in her cross hairs , and he's a dead duck - or is it deer - again have it your own way.
I don't mind at all . Really.
I'm big like that
Submitted:Oct 8, 2008 Reads: 168 Comments: 5 Likes: 2
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