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20/20 hindsight

Poetry By: dubl
Poetry


Complete song idea.

It would be slower with a sad piano and maybe minor percussion.

Mostly snare with brush sticks.


Submitted:Aug 3, 2008    Reads: 90    Comments: 2    Likes: 2   


Tear off the sheets
It never was right
I hit the street
Does this end tonight
And she's with me
Or so I think

So taste the rapture
Taste defeat
It brings me down
Brings me to my knees
And you are with me
I'm right here
And no one needs to know

Someone to love
Someone to hate
The reality is
We separate
And you are my dream
or my heartache
is this in vain?

So taste the rapture
Taste defeat
It brings me down
Brings me to my knees
And you are with me
I'm right here
And no one needs to know

So spare the seconds
Waste your breath on me
I'm not moving
I can barely speak
And if you love me let me know
No one else will know
No one else is so

This hits the fan and it begins again
And you are burning up in space
your voice is static so I
Know you'll never change
This isn't leaving
This is an escape
But you already know
You drove the car for the getaway

So taste the rapture
Taste defeat
It brings me down
Brings me to my knees
And you are with me
I'm right here
And no one needs to know





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