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Rape Me

Poetry By: dubl
Poetry



This poem is a little different from most of my work. I actually took a lot of the style of this poem from contemporary hip-hop artist's styles. Tell me what you think.


Submitted:Jul 7, 2008    Reads: 317    Comments: 3    Likes: 1   


When they put me inside my casket and close it
i hope i'm judged honestly for once and everyone knows it
Cause when the ground breaks
There'll be an earthquake
Look at the mess we've made
Salvation is derived from grace
And you can't save your own ass if you've got two faces
And can we erase this?
The heart beats on but time won't save it
Cause I'm losing patience
Like a doctor who's losing patients
Like you told me one day I'd be the greatest
And thats the dream that's never falling
Like ATR I hear this calling
And your voice beats me down like i am in a mauling
Someone tell me like Petty "stop falling"
Or call the medic cause my attacks not over
I'm 19 years old and almost never sober
But I'm feeling the weight of gravity like oceans
Are drowning me and keeping me frozen
Like your body keeps me suspended in motion
But your words are what I am really holding
Under the covers lies a corpse
Under the sky comes the hearse
And I honestly don't know which is worse
To let this fade or to be a ghost





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