Fun times at the park.
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Submitted: May 13, 2008
Reads: 25
Comments: 1
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the sky was nice that autumn day
when you gave it up for me
a parkbench and i loved every curve
fingers traced lips whispered love
you curled your toes i bit my lip
til you bent in for a kiss
undid my belt and your bra
this feeling's with me even now
you gripped my skin
and tore at it
i breathed you in
til i suffocated
you bit my neck
i ripped your shirt
no need for clothes
no need for words
this wasn't love you said
this was lust but i loved your end
you moaned for me one last time
i kissed your cheek
you put your head on mine
wanted this to keep going
but winter comes and it started snowing
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Comments:
Love love love the last line!
AND, you curled your toes. sweet.
this reminds me of my teen years...oh the fun...heads up...it only gets better!!! yay!!
i may have read this 4 or 5 times!
You got lost in your girl, went overboard in who she was until she said "ah, no...this aint' love" oh brutal! Snow is cold and icy and changes the climate. I think you hear me.
Posted: May 13, 2008
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