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Pseudoscience

Poem By: elegantbleeding
Poetry


Pseudoscience = fake science... You've turned Fake into an art. View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Mar 27, 2007    Reads: 46    Comments: 3    Likes: 0   


 

You've turned Fake into an art.
Friend, you've worked it down to a Tee.
It's inconspicuous to most,
But it's something I can't help but see.
Why create drama with falsehood?
Why do you feel you must
Destroy?
You were fine the way you were.
Who knows
What will become of you now!

You've turned Fake into an art.
Friend, you dream of it at night.
You cry out in your sleep
How you plainly refuse to feel right.
What drove you to pseudoscience?
What made you honestly
Believe?
I see right through your
Looking glass.
You haven't fooled me.

You can turn Fake into an art,
But it's no mystery-
Before the night is over,
The world will clearly see...
You're nothing to me.


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Comments:

I like it, it's smart, and blunt Both are things I highly admire

Posted: Mar 27, 2007

Author Comment:

Why thank you, Mr. diamond. ^_^

Great commentary on modern American pop culture. Worded very nicely...write more!

Posted: Mar 27, 2007

Author Comment:

I plan on it, but in the meantime, I have at least thirty-something other poems that you could peruse.

I like it very much, you have conveyed very clear picture to your readers. I particulary liked the last paragraph. You might like to go and have a look at my latest scribblings .... but they were written when I was very angry.

I'll be looking out for more of your writings

Posted: Mar 28, 2007

Author Comment:

Alright, Lucie. ^_^ I might glance at some of your work after I finish with my homework which I am fiercely procrastinating on. (haha)



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