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Time, Time

Poem By: elegantbleeding
Poetry


The product of writing under pressure. View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Mar 16, 2007    Reads: 39    Comments: 1    Likes: 0   


  Dropped my mirror on the cracked pavement,
Can you tell me if my mind is lost?
Did it pour out of my ears?
Time, time...
I'm short on time.
Time, time...
I have lost my mind.

Waiting for the bus that takes me to heaven,
Can you tell me if I'm running late?
Did it leave without me?
Time, time...
I'm short on time.
Time, time...
No rhythm, no rhyme.

Take a little trip to the lost and found,
Can you tell me if you found what's missing?
I don't know what's missing.
Something...
Something's missing...
Time, time...
I've ran out of time.
Time, time...
No rhythm, no rhyme.


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Comments:

Heh, I understand what you said "The product of writing under pressure." I hate that, I like to take my sweet ass time!
This is really good, conveys a certain confusion. I quite enjoyed it, simple and fast!

Posted: Mar 16, 2007

Author Comment:

It's definitely not one of my favorites, but I like to publish whatever I write because I like to know what people think of it. Sometimes the stuff I hate, other people have great responses to them. Glad you liked it. ^_^



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