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Trapped inside myself

Poem By: EmeraldElizabeth
Poetry


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Submitted: Aug 20, 2008    Reads: 22    Comments: 1    Likes: 2   


Running through the darkness    

not able to exscape myself

hiding in fear of what i will be

shamed into hiding what i am.

Would anybody notice?

would anybody care?

would anybody catch my hand

as i fall farther than i ever have before.

would anybody come to find me in my dark secluded cell

of what i call my mind.

I live for so many

but will anyone live for me?

Will anyone be the light to shatter the darkness

and save me from myself?

if not anybody,

i know one that would,

he would notice,

he would care,

i know one that would save my from myself

and embrace me for all eternity

He wraps me in love as i crawl towards the cross

he is in the dark beside me

letting me know i always have a friend

even in my greatest fall

he is always there to pick me up again.


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Comments:

hehehe I know who "he" is....lol GUESS WO!!!! O.O nice nice poem, keep updating on stuff! hmmm well this is ur friend form japan trip...comment me back!

Posted: Aug 20, 2008

Author Comment:

Well if you think "he" is god then your right its nobody i like...thanks for the comment



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