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This is my first poem, so please could I have some feedback, so that I know whether it is good or bad. Thank you! :)

Submitted:Apr 4, 2009    Reads: 104    Comments: 4    Likes: 0   

Mr Kay, that's his name

People whisper, as in shame

Of his wrongs, though he is right

To burn with anger, with all his might

People shiver, people stare

Not daring to look upon his evil glare,

Teachers tut, students flee,

Hoping 'that will never be me!'


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