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Submitted: Mar 19, 2008 Reads: 46 Comments: 2 Likes: 1
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that last stanza was amazing! "drowned beneath cold water's breath" is my favorite line.
great poem!
Posted: Mar 20, 2008
Wow...^_^! This poem has given me some ideas!! It's awesome. Dark, but awesome^_^. I also really liked the last stanza. It's like she's opening up her mouth and getting ready to scream. You really creatively portrayed emotion here-- awesome job!!!!! I also liked the first stanza-- especially the first line. The word "reigns" really caught my attention.
Lot's of special chocolate to you,
Ghiradelli Girl.
Posted: Mar 25, 2008
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