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City of Terror

Poem By: Erudite Erato
Poetry


Tags: destruction

I always let my poetry do all the talking. There aren't any ways to summarize a poem. View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Jul 27, 2008    Reads: 32    Comments: 3    Likes: 2   


Oh city of terror!
Within the livid avenues,
Trees of autumn;
The invaders,
They fumble with archives,
Drunk with vile memories,
Fed up with humiliated,
And offended skin.
Fear was a presence,
The Silence its shroud,
The words hidden in things,
And Ideas in the eyes,
Contemplated
The division between those who die,
And those who kill.


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Comments:

*gasp* Wonderful! This was WOW! Lol. SOrrY! I'm being a bit dramatic today.

Posted: Jul 27, 2008

Author Comment:

Ooh. Yes, I can see that. Thank you! Lol

Dark and vivid. Very well written.

Posted: Jul 27, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you! :)

I agree with Anna Therese. It is very dark, vivid, and well written. I wish to see more of your work.

Posted: Jul 28, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you :)



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