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Submitted: May 17, 2008 Reads: 32 Comments: 5 Likes: 4
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Very sad. A good poem though!:) I like it.
Posted: May 17, 2008
oo chilling. kinda reminded me of my dearly beloved in a way. very nice. short but within only a few lines you made it oh so chilling. keep it up eternal night! i love your poetry ^^
Posted: May 18, 2008
hi! en. deadly. enjoyed it very much. ;-)
Posted: Jun 8, 2008
I agree with Alice, this is quite chilling in so few lines! It's cold and dark and written really well! It suggests an emotion that is unique in the way that it is hatred, longing and fear combined, that longing to get away from the 'strangler', fear of it, hatred towards it, and also longing to be 'dead cold'.
Really good poem!
Posted: Jul 23, 2008
WOW! I really loved this poem personally. It was short and simply but it's hard to find the words to describe it exactly... not uplifting in the sense of joy in the writing, but uplifting writing style! I really liked how you made it so dark, but wonderful! Keep it up, I really enjoy your writing! =)
~Maple
Posted: Aug 7, 2008
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