The sun is hidden
Beneath the clouds
Shrouded in mist
A light put out
The moon is bright
Yet darker than night
It holds the key
To eternal night
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Sun of the Moon
Poem By: Eternal Night
Poetry
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Submitted: Apr 20, 2008 Reads: 33 Comments: 7 Likes: 4
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Comments:
oooo!! love it!! excellent imagery, the second stanza is my favorite!! you should put that stanza on your page since your name on here is eternal night!
Posted: Apr 20, 2008
You have a light touch with words look forward to reading more of your work.
Evelyn
Posted: Apr 21, 2008
simple and lovely. the words were put together beautifully, I loved it. I can't wait to read more of your stuff!
Steph:)
Posted: Apr 22, 2008
you have depth in your writing that belies yuour age. this poem is brief, yet is meaningful. kutgw. :-)
Posted: Apr 22, 2008
I like it, short and nice.:) As bubbly said, brief but yet meaningful.
Posted: Apr 22, 2008
wow even from the title, it's very intriguing.. very very nice imagery.. what can i say? simplicity is beauty. loved it =)
Posted: Apr 29, 2008
wow! this is great!
Posted: May 29, 2008
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