When I was down
and nearly dead
You gave me a hand
So I wouldn't fall
And now I stand,
On my two legs
You won't let me down
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You Helped me Stand
Poem By: Eternal Night
Poetry
When I was down
and nearly dead
You gave me a hand
So I wouldn't fall
And now I stand,
On my two legs
You won't let me down
I am forever in your dept
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Submitted: Apr 15, 2008 Reads: 40 Comments: 6 Likes: 1
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Comments:
That's very sweet. It's nice having a friend that you can depend on no matter what. Nice poem.
Posted: Apr 15, 2008
Nothing like them
Posted: Apr 15, 2008
Aww, that's so sweet! :D I can relate so well, and I could really sense the emotion in there. Great job. :D
Posted: Apr 17, 2008
simple, short, sweet. with so little words you can create the perfect poem. well done. :)
Posted: Apr 18, 2008
Aha that's a really nice sweet poem. :D
Posted: May 6, 2008
so cute....lovely warm feeling....
Posted: May 11, 2008
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