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My Sister, My Friend, Goodbye

Poem By: EtherealleSeraphynne
Poetry


A love affair diminished, brings pain. A long and sturdy friendship broken, brings pain unimagineable. View table of contents...

 

Submitted: May 23, 2008    Reads: 28    Comments: 2    Likes: 1   


I can breathe easily

and be free of troublesome thought

now that I've broken off

my piece of our heart.

It was distressing at first

To find it simple to sever

a bond

I believed to be forged

in support, shared tears

triumphs and secrets.

It was plain

that I adored and

admired you

as if our ties were sanguineous,

fiery and genuine.

Sister of my soul and wishes

I loved you fiercely

I knew this with not one doubt.

Shattering the illusion

that those bindings were strong,

everlasting

was a relief, a release.

So now I may finally say the goodbye

I had never truly wished for.


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Comments:

this is so good, great emotion!

Posted: May 25, 2008

Author Comment:

Hey, thanks hun! Take care now!

What a beautiful poem tinged with both regret and relief! There are some ties which are deep and multidimensional, sometimes all-consuming and exhausting, and having them broken makes you feel light and liberated, though you miss the depth and beauty of it at times. Very touching and mellow.

Posted: Jun 6, 2008

Author Comment:

Hello Urja- oh my, exactly, you are right on target with what you said, and how you interpreted the message of the poem.
Thank you. Take care!



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