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Submitted: Jun 9, 2008    Reads: 16    Comments: 2    Likes: 2   


You were without roots

to bind you to the

whole

I provided the

light , the

sustenance,

yet here I

lay, unanchored

brittle and 


  about


    to blow


      away.


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Comments:

I love this one. I'll give you a "I like it"!

Posted: Jun 9, 2008

Author Comment:

Oh... thank you so much. That's very sweet!

a lovely write. Unfortunately, I can relate to your words. Very nicely done. Happy writing.....Jerry

Posted: Jun 28, 2008

Author Comment:

Hello Jerry... yes, truly unfortunate. Shouldn't friendship be made of stronger stuff? I had hoped so. Take care.



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