You were without roots
to bind you to the
whole
I provided the
light , the
sustenance,
yet here I
lay, unanchored
brittle and
about
to blow
away.

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Submitted: Jun 9, 2008 Reads: 16 Comments: 2 Likes: 2
You were without roots
to bind you to the
whole
I provided the
light , the
sustenance,
yet here I
lay, unanchored
brittle and
about
to blow
away.
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I love this one. I'll give you a "I like it"!
Posted: Jun 9, 2008
a lovely write. Unfortunately, I can relate to your words. Very nicely done. Happy writing.....Jerry
Posted: Jun 28, 2008
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