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On the greyest landscape of your mind
Is where you will discover a haven
Haunted and hushed by fearful beliefs.
In the most tranquil chamber of your heart
Is where you will perceive a voice
That calls to sincerity and exalts a humble soul.
In valleys and on hills moulded by dreams
Is where you will unlock the secrets to imagination,
And a faith that brings dust to life.
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Submitted: Jul 11, 2008 Reads: 18 Comments: 3 Likes: 3
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I loved, loved, loved, loved this. It reminded me of Whitman for some reason, he's my favorite poet. I especially loved the way you used words like "chamber" "valley" and "hills". It kind of suggest an internal landscape...a world that is inside of us...and the heart is the map of the terrain.
I'd really appreciate it if you could read my novel, "Love in G Minor". I only have 2 chapters up, but comments would be great.
Good work!
Posted: Jul 11, 2008
Thsi is sooo beautiful!!!
:)
Posted: Jul 13, 2008
liked it...
still i will ask you to write in simple words...words that common man would identify with...
Posted: Jul 25, 2008
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