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Feathery whispers traced patterns on a fleshy mountain,
Silent emotions filled with passion
Lit up the sounds of lust.
Fantasies toyed with reality
Physically surpassing spirituality
For one moment in time
Mortality was meaningless,
Purity a matter of choice,
Loyalty incoherent words spewed from a drunk,
And honour a faded memory
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Submitted: Jul 11, 2008 Reads: 21 Comments: 2 Likes: 1
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WOW!This is soo wonderful poem!
I really like it.
:)
Posted: Jul 13, 2008
there r some words, i did not like ...
For example...Circumcised ...this poem became too serious and the real meaning got lost behind the heavy words...
I think poetry is best appreciated when simple words are used...since u r writing for common man...right?
Sorry if i am wrong...i really did not like this one
the tortoise story was really BRILLIANT
Posted: Jul 25, 2008
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