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Poem By: ezzy
Poetry

Tags: life, pain.

How bad times are getting for me... View table of contents...

Submitted: Dec 27, 2007 Reads: 54 Comments: 5 Likes: 3

As days go by my mind becomes restless.

I wonder how would I surivie, as each day passes by.

I become more dark by the strikes of life,

I glare out on the open hoping things will get better,

as hours go by; things don't seem better.

Each year that comes by, times getting troublesome,

As I grow older I begin to lose hope, life to me was wonderful,

I have learn wonderful times get snatched away from me;

leaving me with only a taste I'll always yearn.

The pain inside grows and grows until it is cut once again;

that pain is like cancer that comes and goes.

I will not give up on the hope things will get better, and believe life is beautiful...

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Comments:

Very sad words. I understand what you mean when you say, "leaving me with only a taste I'll always yearn." Those memories are still your memories, though, and remember that no one can ever take those from you.

MA

Posted: Dec 27, 2007

Author Comment:

Your right they are my memories no one can take away. Thank you for reading and comment; wish you a good life.

xxemoxbfsxx

it is a very strong poem. i liked. i know writing about stuff like that is hard sometimes cus it is such an original topic. i think u pulled it off. thanks for writing.
peace out.____xxemoxbfsxx____

Posted: Jan 4, 2008

Author Comment:

Wow thanks I didn't think i was able to pull it off, and thanks for your comments.

laolsen

........speechless......... very deep, i thought it is one of the best poems i've read in a while, maybe, well yes its much better than the ones i write.

Favorite Line: "The pain inside grows and grows until it is cut once again;

that pain is like cancer that comes and goes. "

Keep it up

Posted: Jan 20, 2008

Author Comment:

Why, thank you I appreciate comments like these. And I will.

bubbly

that line "i'll not give up hope" is the crux of the poem. good work. ;-)

Posted: May 8, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you, for the comment and taking time reading it.

Pratibha

Hiya EZZY,this one poem of urs made me ur fan...as if u have written it from ur soul...and I am sure you would always always succeed and defeat any obstacle on ur way...

Posted: Jul 13, 2008