The meaning of life is just existence.
Or�one just strives to survive for their life?...
Life can be meaning full and worth wild,
Or be meaning less and futile.
Life has many meanings to everyone.
To some life has only one meaning... Death.
For one who does not know their destiny,
It can be full of surprises�or be�moot.
If one knows their future, it won't be true.
Life needs to be erratic either way.�
It can be shared with someone whom you care,
Or it could have privacy with no worries.
Life can be flustery or be carefree.
It all depends on how one lives ones life.
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If your intention was to write a Shakespearean style sonnet, then it must have 14 lines of 10 syllables each. Let's analyze. Some spelling corrections.
1. The meaning of life is just existence. (OK)
2. For one just strives to survive for their life?(OK)
3. Life can be meaningful and worthwhile,(9 syllables)
4. Or life can be meaningless and useless. (OK)
5. Life has many meanings to everyone. (OK)
6. To some life has only one meaning... Death. (OK)
7. For one who does not, know their destiny, (OK)
8. It can be full of surprises being moot.(11 syllables)
9. If one knows their future, it's not the same. (OK)
10. Life needs to be erratic good or bad. (OK)
11. It can be shared with someone you care for, (OK)
(Can be shared with someone for whom you care.)
12. Or it can be private with no worries. (OK)
13. Life can be frustrating or be carefree. (OK)
14. It all depends on how you live your life.
Could not find a rhyming scheme. As in even numbered lines: 2&4, 6&8, 10&12, 14(?) Or 1&2, 3&4, 5&6, 7&8, 9&10, 11&12, 13&14. Rhyming, if used, needs to fit some kind of pattern.
Hope this helps.
Happy trails,
Ed Bradley.
Posted: Aug 26, 2007
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