I like your poem -- I like dark poetry, even though I'm not emo. (ha, ha) I wrote a poem on black, too, you should read it!

Anyway, good job on the poem!

Posted: Dec 9, 2007

I like your poem. From a critiquing point of view, had you left out some of the "it is the" I believe it would have been stronger yet express the same feelings. For instance,

The color black is darkness
the color emos & skaters wear
seen when we close our eyes.
Black reprepresents mourning, death ...

But then it is your poem, not mine :-)

Posted: Dec 27, 2007

You have talent ezzy. Thank you for commenting on my poems, with regard to "Peril", the look of the monster is up to the person reading it. The aspect of how it got the girls is non-relevant as it is on theme mostly. The theme of survival. I call the evil character a monster based on its perverse treatment of the young girls. About my love poetry, if I still have the love of my life in my life, I suppose I do. In my heart and memories, but not in my bed. xxx

Posted: Jan 22, 2008

Absolutely loved this one. Fabulous.

Posted: Feb 26, 2008

This is well written and darkly descriptive. I liked it.

Posted: Apr 4, 2008

Am I the only one disappointed in this one? This poem pales in comparison to your other works...

Posted: Jul 29, 2008