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Describing winter where I live. View table of contents...
Submitted: Dec 21, 2007 Reads: 46 Comments: 4 Likes: 1
As I walk, the landscape captures me,
as I view the sky above me, it's a priceless piece.
The cool breeze freezes my finger tips and suface of my face,
the freshness of the air seeping in my lungs.
Winter is the best of them all.
The white, cold, gloomy days always seem to livin me up.
As rain drips down the sencery,
I observe it in awww.
Winter is msyterious.
I just wonder when will the snow shimmer down,
as for where I live its rare moment to see...
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Great poem, really like the way you write
Posted: Dec 27, 2007
I know exactly what you mean. I feel that i could connect with this and that is a graet quality for poets to have because people will understand your writing more. I cant wait to read more from you.
---KCy:]
Posted: Jan 8, 2008
YEAH I LOVE WINTER, and poems about them, so well done, im new to this site and will be posting poems soon, so ill get a few comments up before i do that, anyway ice cool piece here, i enjoyed reading it...
Posted: Jan 20, 2008
winter here is different but i got the feeling from the way you described the fresh air and such. great job ezzy! :]
Posted: May 12, 2008
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