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A poem about me, and how I feel or think.





A poem I did for English class.
She had us doe many of them, I might put them up too, sometime or another.
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Submitted: Dec 17, 2007    Reads: 31    Comments: 3    Likes: 0   


I am the girl at the back of the bus,

Headphones in her ears, so lound I can't even think.

I am the girl people snicker at in school,

Ignoring them as I walk by.

I am the girl who won't change,

Remaining the same because I am happy with myself.

I am the girl sees the world for many different things,

Questioning everything that I don't understand.

I am the girl who can pour her heart out on paper,

Words can never leave my mouth and portray what I feel.

 I am the girl who doesn't show her true self around strangers,

Using a mask to protect myself.

I am the girl who will never fit in,

And I'm happy with that.

I am the girl who goes by the name,

Angie.


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Comments:

Very nice presentation... shows much promise. I enjoyed the read very much. Just a couple of minor grammar mistakes you might want to correct...

2nd line: so "loud" I can't even think...
7th line: I am the girl "who" sees the world...

Welcome to Booksie. I hope you enjoy posting your work here and reading and commenting on that of others. Happy writing...........Jerry

Posted: Dec 17, 2007

Author Comment:

Thanks for commenting.
Sorry about grammar and all, its a creative writing assignement for english and she only gives us five minutes.
XD
Thanks for the compliment.
: )

once again as promising as I expected in the beginning..keep it up!

Posted: Dec 17, 2007

Author Comment:

Thank you!
I don't think I could give up writing if I tried!
: O

I love this! I know exactly that feeling.

--Kcy:]

Posted: Jan 30, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks!
I'm glad you can relate : ]



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