When those you love are those who hate

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Poem By: FadedVanity
Poetry

Tags: sacrifice, love, hate, rejection, life, unfair

This is a song I wrote.
Sometimes in a relationship you have to make sacrifices, people say that a lot, but what happens when that sacrifice is the relationship..
I never thought about it like that, untill I saw my friends situation...
I hope people take this to heart.

And yes, I am planning on using this song in a band,
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Submitted: Jan 7, 2008 Reads: 62 Comments: 3 Likes: 2

When those you love are those who hate.

Lyrics by Angie boulet.

Don’t waste your breath

Don’t waste those tears

On those who aren’t worthy

Worthy of you.

Hush, hush darling.

Were alone now

Don’t you see?

Those who hate are no longer here.

Take off your mask

Wipe off that fake smile

Let the inside shine through

That is where the beauty hides.

If only,

If only they knew…

Without you

I’m dead

Without you

I’m empty

Without you

Oh, without you…

Don’t waste your smile

Don’t waste your time

On someone like me

Someone not worthy

Not worthy of you

Hush, hush darling

Were apart now

Don’t you see?

Without me

Your happy

Without me

Your free

Finally

Your without me.

Without you I have a noose around my neck...

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Comments:

dragonrider

What a perfect song. I love how it changes from the beginning to the end. It has a lot of meaning and I feel that I can actually relate to it. Keep up the awesome work.

Posted: Jan 7, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks so much!
I worked really hard on it, so it feels good hearing that!
I'm glad that others can relate!

EdwardJBradleySr

FadedVanity:

It is a really tough situation when these same people are members of the same family into which you are born and upon whom you must depend.

Good job. Gave it an "I Like It." vote.

Happier trails,

Ed Bradley.

Posted: Jan 7, 2008