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Submitted: Sep 18, 2008 Reads: 27 Comments: 4 Likes: 4
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ah yes! But you have pinpointed that elusive moment so well!
Posted: Sep 18, 2008
Great ending. I like the buildup and the sudden... letdown. :D
Posted: Sep 19, 2008
I liked the suspenceful buildup and then you dropped it...but you did the moment of the poem justice! Well done!
Carolyn Lewis Poe
Posted: Sep 28, 2008
Well done. I think we can all relate to this on one level or another. Me: I can relate to it on both... No, more... more... more...
Sorry
craaig
Posted: Oct 6, 2008
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