Random First Lines: Everdust, please don't be too long...Pass me the sugar, and shift the shapes...I envy the lingering grains in... : Fantasy » Read

Welcome Visitor: Login to the siteJoin the site


Tags: mime, sad, poem, poetry, heart

A sad heart View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Oct 21, 2008    Reads: 28    Comments: 2    Likes: 0   


Rhythm of my beating heart
Betrayal in the recesses of my mind
An arrow pierced, and torn apart
Devastating remnants of loves spellbind
 
Hiding from lust’s bitter pain
Drifting through endless nights
Hopelessly loving in vain
Stalking the growing twilight
 
Bearing through innocence lost
Ghostly haunting through all time
Turning back before the biting frost

Forced coldness into this newfound mime


0

Email this story Email this story | Print Story Print Story | Add to reading list

Comments:

i felt the pain

Posted: Oct 21, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you for your comment.

Mime hide their true feelings for no one to see. Very wonderful poem.

Posted: Oct 31, 2008

Author Comment:

Yes, I think that they do. Thanks for your comment!



Add Your Comments:

Your Name:

Spam protection control::

© Copyright 2008 Fantasy Deception All rights reserved. Fantasy Deception has granted theNextBigWriter, LLC non-exclusive rights to display this work on Booksie.com.

Add to Reading List
Become a fan
Email this story Email this story
Read/Write Reviews Read/Write Reviews
Print Story Print Story



Other writing by Fantasy Deception Erotica Writer Skeleton Crew Discovering Each Other .I love you. Cat And Mouse. More..



Tags

Love, Poetry, Death, Life, Poem, Romance, Pain, Fantasy, Hope, Sad, Sex, Hate, God, Horror, War, Humor, Hurt, Sadness, Loss, Dark, Fiction, Depression, Heart, Family, Friendship.

About | News | Contact | Your Account | TheNextBigWriter | Advertise

© 2008 TheNextBigWriter, LLC. All Rights Reserved. Terms under which this service is provided to you. Privacy Policy.