I wrote this for my ex....it's how i felt before we broke up View table of contents...

Submitted: Jun 26, 2008    Reads: 11    Comments: 2    Likes: 2   

Brown eyes look so trusting and warm

They seem to be open for me

To see the real person you are

These eyes turn cold

They shut everyone

Including me, the one you love

The smile leaves and forces me to see

The bitterness embedded in your heart

Everyone says the eyes are the window to a soul

You shades are drawn

Like there’s no one home

Open the windows

Let me see

The one I love

Who smiles at me

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bubblescutie06

I really like this poem! Alomost as much as I like U!!!! How do u add a chapter?

Posted: Jul 8, 2008

Author Comment:

u have to hit edit on the book then u hit 'add chapter' it should go...glad u like it...it was really hard to put on here:)

Alicia Branson

i loved it, i liked the end the best!

Posted: Jul 21, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks :)

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