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Alone at the Shore

Poem By: Farah Yameen
Poetry


Tags: loss

A story of spiritual desolation View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Nov 28, 2007    Reads: 57    Comments: 7    Likes: 0   


We strolled along the sandy shore

Just my friend and I

And all the while I capered round

He gently kept close by.

 

The sand - it streched for miles and miles

The sea for millions more

My artless mind pined to caress

Every inch of the sea and shore.

 

My friend, the Wise

He held me close

He knew the sea was wild

As unkind was the shore.

 

Restless in His protective grip

I wriggled out of his care

And ecstatic I gambolled away

to, I knew not what snares.

 

I plunged into the inviting sea

Thinking there wasn't but pleasure there

Delusioned I was, as I soon found out

For the sea was not my lair.

 

Hapless I screamed in silent plea

My Friend, He never stayed

To the most mute of my calls He came

And held me safe again.

 

But naive I was

I would not stay

With His love I would contend not

And soon I wrenched away.

 

The shore was still, the sea was calm

I was sure there wasn't harm

Again I stepped in dazzling blue

And in, and in, and in

 

And though He came 

To my voiceless call, and pulled me to the shore

He sadly turned His eyes away

He held my hand no more.  


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Comments:

I don't know if i totally understand this poem but what the message means to me is very powerful. I really thought this poem was very good.

Posted: Nov 28, 2007

This sounds soo honest. Simply written and good. I like it.

Posted: Dec 18, 2007

Author Comment:

Thanks.

this is very powerful farah i really loved it

Posted: Jan 6, 2008

Author Comment:

I appreciate your praise. I've been inactive for a long time, but I'll be comin back soon.

Hi there! What is it about the sea? A great inspiration for creative writing. I enjoyed this poem, and maybe you want to read one of mine about the sea too...'Sea music'.Ricky.

Posted: Feb 5, 2008

Author Comment:

I know ... i sometimes wish i lived near the shore. The sea says so much.

Beautiful like you.

Posted: Feb 9, 2008

Weeeeeeee......I LOVE this! From one piecses to another! You rocked this poem....it is incredibly similar to my poem Cosmic Pirate. I think this is a multitude of dimensions....beautiful dimensions...

Posted: Feb 12, 2008

This strikes me as metaphorical parenthood...point out the hole that your child is walking towards, but it is their choice to keep walking towards it. I really liked this. Life's lessons in prose.

Posted: Apr 2, 2008



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