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Submitted: Nov 24, 2007 Reads: 40 Comments: 3 Likes: 2
Calm, deep, still,
In tranquil steadiness
Not a ripple, not a fold
A glassy sheet.
Cool, gentle, untroubled,
In peaceful movement
Graceful, embracing balm
A gliding dream.
On the brink -
A movement, a flash
Now there, now gone
Terrified uncertainty.
Edging cautiously,
Penetrating the calm.
Water and wind, wind and water
And death.....
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I really love this poem! its so great how much the words fit, even without and rhyme. it just shows you that you dont need a rhyme for a awesome poem!
Xx ash xX
Posted: Nov 24, 2007
very powerful especially your use of the word death at the end i loved this you have a wonderful way with words
Posted: Nov 27, 2007
wow, it's definately one to remember, very beautiful
Posted: Mar 21, 2008
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