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Withering Away

Poem By: Farah Yameen
Poetry


Tags: death

The death of green life on earth. Treated without scientific renderings or cliched sermonisings( I hope). View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Feb 4, 2008    Reads: 51    Comments: 7    Likes: 3   


Films of murky filthy grey

Settle silently upon the vibrant green,

Tenuously, poisonously clinging to life;

Steadily, abrasively, eroding away :

The illusion that was vibrant green.

 

Insidiously in the breath of life

As sure as deadly curare

The venom spreads

Asphyxiating, choking, withering away:

The illusion that was vibrant green.

 

Illusion it was?

All but an illusion,

That we strove so hard to kill?

Crushing away every leaf of green

Killing by inches ; a deathless torture

Drawing along the man who lived

The illusion that was vibrant green.


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Comments:

Hello Farah. I think that you DID treat this subject as you say in your comments.I am a fan of poems that
have repeated last lines or phrases to emphasise their sentiment. A 'Like it' from me. Ricky.

Posted: Feb 5, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanx....I am honoured

This, this is more than a poem. It is a motion. I love this.Please check out my stuff. 6 stars!

Posted: Feb 5, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanx...iwas apprehensive since global issues r not really my subject.

cool

Posted: Mar 16, 2008

great work farah lets just hope that it never comes to this for real

Posted: May 9, 2008

Author Comment:

well its a feeble hope @ the rate things are going

Yes, you treated the topic well. No sermons but poignant and a bit frightening none the less.

Posted: May 16, 2008

Author Comment:

i'm glad i got the effect acrooss..thanx 4 da appreciation

Hi Farah.Your poem is definitely an alarming call... the poem is an honest appeal to understand the gravity of the situation.Good attempt

Posted: Jun 3, 2008

Ayesha
(not registered user)

I find your work enchanting keep writing, i can't wait to read more.

Posted: Jun 24, 2008



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