Lush green carpet
‘Neath my feet.
Bed of the forest
With its earthen smell.
Hidden low
Beneath the fauna.
A place to rest
For the small and the meek.
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Poem By: flannelman
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bit i wrote for school. liked this draft. View table of contents...
Submitted: Jan 30, 2008 Reads: 39 Comments: 3 Likes: 2
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Beautiful piece, real earthy. I like it a lot.
Posted: Jan 30, 2008
A well described forest scene. A 'like it' from me.
Ricky.
Posted: Jan 30, 2008
Nice. You might try moving "Bed of the forest/With its earthen smell" to the beginning; it might work even better.
This one's my favorite of your poems.
Posted: Feb 11, 2008
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