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Observing A Berkshire Winter Through My Dorm Room Window

Poem By: flannelman
Poetry


as the title says. i was sitting in my room waiting for something to print, and the weather stuck out at me. half stream of consciousness. View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Jan 30, 2008    Reads: 36    Comments: 3    Likes: 0   


snow falls on the wet ground where rain had fallen not long before.

January in New England; damp dark and cold.

The wind howls past my bedroom window, the Beatles play softly in the background.

It is late in the month; the spring will explode soon, rosebuds and new limbs at every turn.

A surprisingly warm winter for Berkshire county, the snow hasn’t blanketed us in its usual loving way.

But now, late in the season, rain has given way to snow, and the ground will be white once more.

Trying to maintain the wintery appeal that draws the tourist crowd.

If only the snow were on the city’s payroll. Then it would always be a Berkshire winter in the Berkshire’s.

 

 

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CITY'S PAYROLL - people have enough taxes.

Posted: Jan 30, 2008

Author Comment:

are you kidding? seriously. it was a joke. i was just observing something about where i live. trust me sir, i personally believe that this country over taxes it's people to the point of stupidity to finance a war that we have no business being in. now that we have that clear, please keep your political rantings OFF of my comments. it has nothing to do with what i was writing nor does it have any effect on my life how you feel accept that i now consider you to be someone who needs to display his/her political views to the world to gain any attention. good for you.

Brr, I got a chill just reading it.

Posted: Feb 10, 2008

this is really just how the weather has been the past few weeks. my dorm has a good view of trees, and this is what i wrote looking at the trees (waiting for my dreadfully slow printer to finish)

Posted: Feb 11, 2008



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